Writing Center

       The writing center visit for the second semester was a wonderful way to improve my writing on the research paper. When I went to the writing center, I went to we focused on mostly trying to find all my errors. When we did this it wasn't just the writing fellow talking your ear off; it was an idea of your trying to see how to make your paper better. So after I read my paper, I realized I was missing a lot of embedded quotations. So embedding my quotes is a hard thing to remember. Although when I worked on embedding my quotes with another person, it seems to stick to my mind more and going through the paper I could remember to embed quotes by myself. Another thing we focused on was transitions. Sometimes I lack transitions when they are needed the most and have them when I don't need them. So I was able to switch them and make them stronger. Then my piece was better and made more sense to where it got a good grade.